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Offline TJ

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« on: June 21, 2003, 02:44:30 PM »
The Story in m$ word 2000 format. this is the best looking and easiest to follow version of the story. it's also the biggest and apllication dependant.
The Story in .txt format. doesn't look as nice, and is harder to read than the first version, but it's here for people who can't open a word 2000 file.
The Story in html format. the same thing as the .txt version, but online.

there may be some stuff i missed doing, but hey, it happens.
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This is great
« Reply #1 on: June 21, 2003, 03:09:41 PM »
I barely remember most of this.

In the beginning, was I actually spontaneously replaced by Godai, or was that a typo somewhere along the line?  'o_O

Anyway, I'm working on converting it to a text-only version for whom it may concern.  Much smaller filesize, more compatible.

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« Reply #2 on: June 21, 2003, 05:15:46 PM »
......

I read the first half and......

That was....can't find the words, it's negetive though. Boring? Stupid? :roll: Some random events like the penguin and such....stories made up from multiple people in short forms just don't work out right...... :|
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« Reply #3 on: June 21, 2003, 05:44:00 PM »
Whoa, 92 pages!  I'll read it later.
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« Reply #4 on: June 21, 2003, 06:24:12 PM »
92? it should only be 73 pages... hmm...

and mirk, you weren't spontaneously replaced. there's a line that introduces godai after you're there. you just kinda disapeared for no apparent reason around that point.. heh...
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Done and done
« Reply #5 on: June 21, 2003, 06:29:15 PM »
Finished.  I also fixed some minor spelling errors and such, but most of what I did was removing special characters and deleting the garbage code that MSWord puts in the file.

Old filesize: 308kb
New filesize: 168kb

I have two versions - .txt and .html (identical to the .txt but with line breaks inserted) - ready to view.  Unfortunately Port5 is being rather disagreeable lately.

How do I upload them to the Liquid Endeavor server?

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« Reply #6 on: June 21, 2003, 09:08:01 PM »
Pages 70-71
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Froghawk: Where's everyone else?
Mirkon: Well, Icefox and Goliath are finishing up a last sweep of the area, and should be landing their fighters shortly.
Froghawk: Godai?
Panther: Last I saw him was in the bottom level of the building. He's a big boy, he can take care of himself.
Froghawk: Kravis?
*Panther and Mirkon's smiles fade into frowns.*
You should add in
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Froghawk: Saxaxe?
Mirkon: Who?
At that point, no one knew who the hell I was.
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« Reply #7 on: June 21, 2003, 10:30:07 PM »
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92? it should only be 73 pages... hmm...

I think it must be my font settings.
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« Reply #8 on: June 21, 2003, 10:30:17 PM »
Well all I can say right now is that I appreciate you doing this Kravis, now all I have to do is find some time to read it  =)
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« Reply #9 on: June 21, 2003, 10:32:15 PM »
You left me out!!!
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« Reply #10 on: June 22, 2003, 12:41:28 AM »
No appearance by me. Makes it so... depressing.  :|

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Hi Proph!
« Reply #11 on: June 22, 2003, 01:44:53 AM »
Well you're used to depressing things, aren't you Prophet?  =P

Still waiting on some help for the story uploading...

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« Reply #12 on: June 22, 2003, 12:07:17 PM »
do you have my email addy mirk? if so, you can send it to me, and i'll put it in the story directory.

oh, and if you do email it to me, let me know so i know to go check my email.
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Done and done
« Reply #13 on: June 22, 2003, 01:36:10 PM »
Okay.  It's been sent.

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« Reply #14 on: June 22, 2003, 09:32:47 PM »
I was in the story. You cut me out!!
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« Reply #15 on: June 23, 2003, 12:41:27 AM »
Thanks for uploading those things for me, Krav.

http://www.liquidendeavor.com/story/story.txt
http://www.liquidendeavor.com/story/story.html

Saxaxe, you weren't cut out of the story.

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Saxaxe then stepped out from behind a wall.*
Panther: TRAITOR!
*Panther turns sax into anime slut.*
Saxaxe: I'm not a traitor! I came because the news said you guys were here! And I'm not an anime slut!


That's your first appearance, but not your last.

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« Reply #16 on: June 23, 2003, 01:29:13 AM »
The only apperance I remember having was:
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Saxaxe: *Dies*
Forumers mourn for five months
Mikon: Oh well. We didn't know him anyway.
Saxaxe: *comes back to life* *looks around* *dies again*
That was my only appearance.
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Sigh.
« Reply #17 on: June 23, 2003, 02:57:16 AM »
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*...Saxaxe dies. Froghawk pushes the third button, and his clone explodes.*
Froghawk: Sax! My friend!
*Froghawk sits down to cry.*
Voice: Self destruct activated. Evacuating all life forms. Oh, and by the way, you all suck.
*Froghawk was then transported back to the rest of the group.*
Kravis: Where have you been?
Froghawk: Shutting down the Xbox mind controllers. You are free now! But Sax is dead!
Mirkon: Oh, well, we didn't know him anyway.


So it was edited.  So what?

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That was my only appearance.


I already posted another one.
Do you want me to find every single point your name comes up and post it for you?

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« Reply #18 on: June 23, 2003, 04:11:55 AM »
Very funny. Too bad I'm not in it. My arrogance and stupidity could get you all killed. ^_^
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« Reply #19 on: June 23, 2003, 09:03:01 AM »
the only thing i cut out were most of godai's sex scenes because they were stupid.

the only other major changing i did was, i moved where one of frog's posts occured so that it fit better with the rest of the story, but i didn't change the post any.

other than that, everything is as-is. i didn't change anything, i just organized it and made it look pretty.  so however much you're in the story right now, that's all you were ever in the story.
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« Reply #20 on: June 23, 2003, 01:22:07 PM »
Hm. I only remembered that one time.
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« Reply #21 on: June 23, 2003, 11:48:09 PM »
Quote from: TJ Kat
the only thing i cut out were most of godai's sex scenes because they were stupid.


Lol, whoops  =P
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« Reply #22 on: June 25, 2003, 05:03:21 AM »
HOORAY!

KRAVIS IS DOOOOONE!

*gives Kravis an orange*

though be all powerful patient editing one.

anyways woohoo!

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Godai: Oh Hitomi
*Hitomi giggles. Unbeknownst to them, Panther was listening right outside the door.*
Panther: Hehe. Here's my chance.
*Panther slips the barrel under the door and pulls the trigger.*
MAGCA: *Windows error sound.* Please register.
*Panther screams.*
Hitomi: Did you hear something?
Godai: No, no, not at all.
*45 minutes later. Panther hits ok.*
Panther: Finally. Now time for payback!
*Panther slips the barrel under the door and pulls trigger.*
MAGCA: *Windows error sound* Demo trial ended.
*Panther screams again.*
Hitomi: I'm getting worried.
Godai: About what?
Hitomi: Oh it's nothing.
*1 hour later.*
MAGCA: Download complete.
*Panther wakes up.*
Panther: Huh? Oh finally. NOW it's time for payback!
*Panther sticks the barrel under the door and pulls the trigger.*
MAGCA: *Windows error sound* Updates needed.
*Panther screams even longer.*
Hitomi: Please tell me you heard that.
*Godai shakes his head.*
Hitomi: Oh well.
*30 minutes later.*
Panther: NOW IT HAS TO WORK!
*Panther sticks the barrel under the door and fires. Just as he fires the Janitor walks up behind him.*

Boo-yeah...
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« Reply #23 on: June 25, 2003, 07:27:49 AM »
HEY! I'm still witha womans body! :cry:
Can't wait 'till Season 2...
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W00H00!
« Reply #24 on: June 26, 2003, 09:07:23 PM »
Yes!  That story rocked!  Thanks kravis!

Lets hope there is a season 2...
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